Ivy 100wc

4 Responses to Ivy 100wc

1. ecoyne says:

   March 3, 2015 at 3:09 pm

   HI Eva.
   This is an interesting mystery. I especially enjoyed the suspense you built with ellipsis and short sentences.
   Could you use commas in list and to separate clauses next time?
   Great verbs chosen too! ( peered, panic)

   Mr Coyne
   • Ivy Sagoe-arthur says:

     March 9, 2015 at 6:19 pm

     Thank you but am I Eva?
2. ecoyne says:

   March 3, 2015 at 3:10 pm

   Hi Ivy not Eva! heh oops
   • Ivy Sagoe-arthur says:

     March 9, 2015 at 6:20 pm

     Thank you for correcting my name!! 🙂

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