The Poisonous Spider

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10 Responses to The Poisonous Spider

  1. serrj says:

    5 out 5 because it is so good because you have put everything

  2. serrj says:

    WOW BRAVO BRAVO IT ALOMST MADE ME CRY!!!!!!

  3. mitcr says:

    Great way to set out the story and I’m interested in it

  4. mitcr says:

    Great way to set out the story and I’m interested in it
    .Mortimer’s ha funny.

  5. serrj says:

    it will be better if you put a scary spider picture

  6. mirea says:

    awesome work five out of five I love it but

  7. sarah says:

    I really love you creative imagination.
    What do you mean when you say they lived happily ever after?
    I think you can add more commas.

  8. sarah says:

    I meant More

  9. sarah says:

    Sorry its your

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